主角,特別是這個穿越過來,故事裡一切的一切基本上都圍繞著她展開的主角,竟然沒有想做的事,那請問故事該如何開展?哪怕作者用很多個日常把它串連起來,但終究逃不過這個空洞的內涵啊,越看越覺得這位女主活得很得過且過,她做的一切事情都與她自己無關,喜歡上黃瀨的過程也不夠有說服力,以至於這些劇情都沒有被一個主心骨給連接起來,當然真要說的話也不是沒有,硬是把「男女主角之間的相處過程」給算進去的話還是勉強說得通,但是這和女主的人設就一點關係都沒有了啊,她如果是土生土長的這個世界的人那也就罷了,問題是她前身是一代戰神,還是穿越到不同世界的存在,不覺得她的表現與她的人設超級衝突的嗎?黃瀨穿過樹叢找到佛蘭西斯的小天地時她就會摸匕首警戒,怎麼她初來乍到這個世界的時候不會想搞清楚身處環境的狀況?要跳過也該交代一些基本的情況才對吧,都不解釋也就算了,日常一天天的過,這位女將軍都不會有任何想法?該上課就上課、該談戀愛就談戀愛?就很奇怪啊,打打殺殺了大半輩子,怎麼可能穿越之後就不會思考了?更別說周遭環境明顯就和她以前有非常巨大的差異,她都不會想了解一下這邊的風俗民情?怎麼可能,如果她當將軍的時候也是這種態度應該早就戰死了還哪來的不世之功?對男人的態度很有趣是沒錯,但作者有沒有想過她對女人的態度很不自然呢?既然都要反著來了,難道佛蘭不該疑惑為何這個世界的女人都跟她印象中的不一樣嗎?她會要求黃瀨他們在海邊要穿多一點,為何她對身邊女性不會指指點點、要她們「像個女人一樣」呢?
以同人作品來說,這部作品應該算很不錯的了。之所以用「應該」,主要是因為我不常看同人作品,無從與其他作品做比較,單純看內容以及閱讀時的體感就是還不錯,自創的角色與原作角色之間的互動不會到太突兀,女主很有個人特色,劇情還算有條理,橋段偶能會心一笑,是一部非常輕鬆自在的作品。至於為什麼不是「好看」、「非常棒」,就,沒有給我這樣的感覺啊。但是敘述和邏輯都過關了欸,問題出在哪?讓我們再換個角度思考一下。
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【心得】《智能遊戲》毒後感──該做到什麼樣的程度才能叫「說故事」? 作者:逸昌
以一部網路小說而言,其實也還可以,不過不失,但有一些小問題,首當其衝的就是這個楔子在很大程度上破壞了我的閱讀體驗。我第一次閱讀時大概讀了不到一千字就想關掉,大概只有兩種情況會導致這個結果,第一是作者明顯基礎不足,包括但不限於標點符號亂標或不標、錯字爆炸多、連正常的語句都寫不出來等等;第二就很主觀,就是單純感到不好看、沒興趣。
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在星塵大的心得裡也有提及這部分(雖然不是評這部),作者的回應是以她自己看同人作品的標準來說,把這些原作就有的畫面再寫一次會顯得很囉唆,沒什麼意義,同人作品就像是原作的補充,猶如課本與補充教材之間的關係一般,想知道詳細的內容去看原作就行了。姑且先不討論這個觀點是對是錯,但……
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